Thursday 7th May 2015
Dear diary
1918 I have just landed in Gallipoli .It is very sad as I talk about it because lots of people have been shot even my friend Bob . I have already been to the nurse Mary it was very scary going to the nurse but I saw one of my very very good friends Jeff dead on a stretcher .It is very loud as the guns go off . It is very hard to sleep at night because some people are still letting there guns go off to wake us up . it is even word in the day because every body is moving around and you have to sleep in the mud it is very grose we all stink our clothes is very revolting . I wish that I did not come over here because it is very scary I miss you family and friends I want to come back in 12 more weeks the water tastes like mud.
your loving son Desmond {:)
You are doing really well.It has blow me a way.
ReplyDeletefrom zoe
Hi Mackenzie
ReplyDeleteI like you story I like how you described how you landed in Gallipoli but it was just a bit hard to see your writing you might want to change it
yea you are right hay i will have o change next time
ReplyDeleteyea you are right hay i will have o change next time
ReplyDeleteHi Mackenzie I like your story about the weird girl
ReplyDeleteHi Mackenzie I like your story about the weird girl
ReplyDeletethanks zoe that is very kid of you
ReplyDeletethanks zoe that is very kid of you
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