Friday, 15 May 2015

Anzac Day dear diary

Thursday 7th May 2015


Dear diary

 1918 I have just landed in Gallipoli  .It is very sad as I talk about it because lots of people have   been shot even my friend Bob . I have already been to the nurse Mary it was very scary going to the nurse but I saw one  of  my very very good friends Jeff dead on a  stretcher .It is very loud as the guns go off . It is very hard to sleep at night because some  people are still letting there guns go off to wake us up . it is even word in the day because every body is moving around  and you have to sleep in  the mud it is very grose we all stink  our clothes is very revolting . I wish that I did not come over here because  it is very scary  I miss you family and friends I want to come back in 12 more weeks the water tastes like mud. 

                   your loving son Desmond {:)



                      

8 comments:

  1. You are doing really well.It has blow me a way.
    from zoe

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  2. Hi Mackenzie
    I like you story I like how you described how you landed in Gallipoli but it was just a bit hard to see your writing you might want to change it

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  3. yea you are right hay i will have o change next time

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  4. yea you are right hay i will have o change next time

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  5. Hi Mackenzie I like your story about the weird girl

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  6. Hi Mackenzie I like your story about the weird girl

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  7. thanks zoe that is very kid of you

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  8. thanks zoe that is very kid of you

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